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Where should children grow up, in the country or in a big city? It is a really controversial question.

TOEFL Essay Topic 20 - It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

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Where should children grow up, in the country or in a big city? It is a really controversial question.

Where should children grow up, in the country or in a big city? It is a really controversial question. There are people on both sides who have very strong feeling. From my point of view, it is more sagacious to choose the former because there are several evidence to demonstrate my point. I will choose some of the most important ones.

No one can deny the fact that the environment in the country is much better than in the city. There is no noise, no air and water pollution Children can concentrate their focus on the study without any interruption. We can learn from something in common from the experience of some great scientists that most of them agree that living in the country is great for their work. And this is why most of the universities and colleges locate in the country.

It might also be noted that children have a large ground for them to frolic. There are large lawn, trees, hills and stream around. Children can make their body stronger and learn a lot of skills for living outside. An authoritative report indicate that those who go out frequently are more healthy than those who stay home for a long time and suggest everyone especially children should go out more.

Last but not least, natural custom in the country help children to grow up in a good society. Something in the city such as violence and sex do harm to children because they do not have ability to protect themselves. That why living in the country is a good choice.

One coin has two sides. There are also a lot of advantages for children to grow up in the big city. They can go to the museum and library in the city conveniently, can keep up with development of the society and so on.

In a word, there are both advantage and disadvantage for children to grow up in the country or in the city. But frankly speaking, everyone should admit that country can provide more for children’s growing up.




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