TOEFL_Independent Writing 128

TOEFL Essay Topic 128 - Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Author: genki0605 | Date: May 24, 2016 | Score: 5

I believe that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. I have two reasons to support my opinion; first, physical exercise has it own educational effect, which is sometimes as large as that of academic courses. Second, physical exercise is useful for students to refresh be...

This essay has been rated a score of 5. Essays in this score category are premium content. Please Register to access this essay.

[See more essays on this topic] | [Submit an essay on this topic]

Under the same topic

Pets Score: 5.5 May 25th, 2018 by kongbo
Whether you believe it or not, Americans spent a whopping 69.5 billion dollars on their pets in 2017 and owners have to pay ever higher price for the same thing over and over. This phenomenon has t... Read more
Physical exercise is needed in educadional scenes. Score: 3.5 March 1st, 2017 by ayana

Some people think that students only have to make priority to academic studies. It is true that there are a lot of subjects which should be learnt, such as math, science, and history. However, I would like to emphasize that exerxise teaches them a key to realize such subjects.
First of all, whenever we do exercise, we always make some images concrete. That is to say, we move our hands, legs, even musckles in the way which we want to by using our minds whether consciously or not. It helps us to learn something. For example, imagine that there is a difficult math question. If you read its answer, isn't that meaningless? It is not until you finish understanding that and rewrite that on white paper without relying on anything that you can say that you learn that.
Secondly, physical exercise is able to be a kind of amusement. Only studying don't make our perspective broder. apart from minds, we should utilize our body.
Finally, at sports we have more opportubities to teach others, or be taught than at academic classes. Output is so often held that we can understand whether we ourselves learn one thing. Only if we study sitting in front of our tables, there is the limitation of output, although input is massive. Though doing sports, teamwork is established, which tells us that teaching each other is the most effective way to study.

Read more
Sports or Academics? Score: 4.5 August 11th, 2016 by
Some people feel that physical exercise should be an important part of the school, others feel that schools should concentrate more on academics. A famous indian monk once said that India today nee... Read more
The importance of the physical exercise at school Score: 4.5 May 24th, 2016 by
Physical exercise plays a significant role in people's lives. It is very important for maintaining our mental and body health. In my point of view, I think that it is an excellent idea that exerci... Read more
Physcical exercise – part of school programs Score: 5 March 16th, 2016 by
The debate regarding physical education and its place in school programs dates from a long time ago. From my point of view, physical exercises constitute an integral part of basic education provide... Read more
Exercise in school Score: 4.5 January 15th, 2016 by
Some people think that students should concentrate to study at school. Others think that students need to take some physical exercise in every school day. If asked, both groups will provide logical... Read more

Leave a Comment