TOEFL Essay Topic 185 - You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
There are some people who think to use limited money to purchase a house is better, but others prefer to
There are some people who think to use limited money to purchase a house is better, but others prefer to purchase a business. But I would have to say that, if I were faced with this issue,I would probably follow to purchase a business. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my view point.
No issue is more important now than the one that refers to reason one history witnesses and presents many examples. Many rich men always put their money into business for more money. They never feel enough, that is the reson they successful. For same reason, do not feel enough for a house and do more thinking of future.
Reason two is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. It is no better illustration that can demonstrate the view. Purchasing a house may used most of your money, but keep the house well will spend extra money and time: you must spend many time on your garden; the roof need to renew; you have to pay a lot of tax because the house every year. If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.
Superior as purchasing a businees is, however, purchasing a businees also has own demerits, too. You purchase a businees may get nothing, and lost extra money on it. Nevertheless, the advantages of purchasing businees carry more weight than that of disadavantage of it, so the most striking conclusion is obvious.
To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an orgnic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely reach the conclusion that using limited money to purchase a business is better.
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