TOEFL Essay Topic 6 - If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
There are many things that my hometown needs to be changed, but the most important thing that I would like
There are many things that my hometown needs to be changed, but the most important thing that I would like to change is the condition of my hometown`s environment. Because a good environment condition will bring hometown`s residents health, will attract more visitors to my hometown, and impel my hometown`s economy.
It is obvious that good environment condition can bring people health. It is reported that generally, people living in a relatively beautiful and quiet environment have better spirit than people living in a nasty and crowd environment. So a better environment will bring my hometown`s residents not only the physical health, but also the mental health. Therefore, people in my hometown will work more efficiently and live more happily.
Furthermore, good environment condition will attract more visitors to my hometown to visit. If my hometown establishes a good reputation of having beautiful clouds, blue sky, clean streets, and fresh air, certainly there will be a lot of people who are interested in having a trip to my hometown to spend the weekend.
In addition to it, a good environment will lead a good chance for companies to invest in my hometown. As the industry expands in my hometown, the economy condition will also expand. This can bring a lot of employment opportunities; therefore, the residents’ will live in my hometown with a high life quality.
I hope my hometown will have a better environment in the future. Because good environment will provide better health, better tourists resource, better investment condition for residents in my hometown.
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