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The Mozart School of Music

GRE Essay Topic 845 - The Mozart School of Music should obviously be the first choice of any music student aware of its reputation. First of all, the Mozart School stresses intensive practice and training, so that students typically begin their training at a very young age. Second, the school has ample facilities and up-to-date professional equipment, and its faculty includes some of the most distinguished music teachers in the world. Finally, many Mozart graduates have gone on to be the best known and most highly paid musicians in the nation. Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument.

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The Mozart School of Music

In the above mentioned topic author is suggesting that all students

In above mentioned paragraph author is suggesting that each student should go Mozart school of music. He suggests that school because of its high quality of equipment, experienced teachers and success rate graduated students.

This suggestion has few loopholes first author forgot to mention schools success rate in 10-20 years of time because this school might be good 5 years ago but what about present? Now the quality might be unacceptable. Second Each individual is different so does his learning style thus individual teaching plan should be discussed in each school but author does not talk about it.
Third school success rate might be good because good set of students were registered that time so they all did good but if students who are not genius do they also success in that school? Author forgot to discuss about it.

Author suggestion might be convincing if he mentions school success rate in 20 years time and individual teaching plan where each student is taught according to his learning capabilities and last if he compares the success of Mozart school from other schools.
If author also mention about success rate of students who are not genius but did well in that school then his argument will be very convincing.




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