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The main date we should remember

TOEFL Essay Topic 159 - The twentieth century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered about the twentieth century? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

Author: Elenapan | Date: January 12, 2013 | Score:4.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=

The main date we should remember

There no doubts that the twentieth century is the most progressive than previous. For example, were invent plenty of useful staff: cars, trains, planes, rockets and many other things that made our life faster and more simple. However, twenties century changed not only material living, but also people’s minds. In my opinion, we should always remember the Second World War, that changed life of millions of people that lived in twentieth century.

First of all, we should remember brave people who lived and who stopped violence and terror of enemy. Solders left their houses and families to protect future generation from negative and stood by fr better life. What is more, all of them knew that it might be the last time they see their children and wifes. Although pain and tears tore on parts their souls, they were all like one team of friends. Despite that fact that there were death around of them, they were more optimistic and friendly than modern people.

Secondly, as far as we remember about Great Victory, we remember the names of heroes who left their life for saving other people. For example, unknown solder who saved from fire little girl. That people did not think a second to help those who need it. It is important to remember about their heroism nowadays. Unfortunately, today in twenty first century less people are ready to help each other than in twentieth century. Thus, we should remember about war everyday.

To sum up, it is obvious that people’s speed of live become faster and more comfortable. The reason is progress that we achieved in twentieth century. However, it is very actual now to remember the most important event of twentieth century that changed a lot in our grandparent’s lives – a war. The most important of changes is union of different nations, friendship which helped to overcome death and love that could win any enemy.




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