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the innovation

TOEFL Essay Topic 152 - Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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the innovation

Because there are so many technological innnovations that have changed our way of life radically, we can not imagine what the life would be like without the innnovations. The commnunication means and transportation system are good example of these innovations. Among the innnovations, nevertheless, the biggest impact on our life was brought about by the invention of the Internet and other related technologies and I will provide three resaons to support my idea in the following paragraphs.

First and foremost, the Internet technology have changed how we contact with each other. Fity years ago, it tooks several days to communicate with friends who lived in other state because letter is the only means to correspond. In contrast, new methods of conveying messages such as LINE, Facebook and Skype have made it much easier for us to communicate with friends around the world instanteniously.

Second, the contriving of the Internet technology has provided us with enormous resources of information. For instance, when you come across a word you have not heard of, a quick serching of the word by google will give you good understanding of the term and other related information. The fact that now researchers all over the world uses the Internet to facilitate their studies describe how important the technology is for us..

Last and not least, the productivity of labor forces has been increased dramatically by the Internet-based technology. Nowadays we alomost all day long make use of the Internet to communicate with the colleages and know how far other works go on. The change of the way we work increases the efficiency of work because we can easily and promptly share good solutions with colleages to the problems we have on the work and do not have to repeat the work other have already done.

For all of the reasons I provided above, in conclusin, the most dramatical change of our life was presented by the birth of the Internet and other related technologies.




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