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The benefit of trying new things

TOEFL Essay Topic 50 - Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Author: Kenzou | Date: December 19, 2017 | Score:5

Recently in modern society, people’s sense of values have been more diverse and they have various opinions as to importance of new methods. Some people prefer to stick to the conventional ways. Others take risk and adopt new methods. If asked, both groups would present compelling arguments to cor...

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