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TOEFL Essay Topic 131 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Author: kk | Date: April 9, 2018 | Score: 5

Some people think teachers should be paid more when their students learn well while others think teachers should be paid based on stable salary system. If asked, both sides would provide logical reasons to support their stances. Personally, I disagree with the statement that teachers should be pa...

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Successful Score: 4.5 October 13th, 2018 by KOKOKO

In Japan, where I live, people tend to respect presidents or founders of companies. However, I disagree with the idea that only people who earn a lot of money are successful. I am of the opinion that in order to spend a successful life, how much money he earns is less important than how someone thinks about what he accomplished. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with, if rich people are not satisfied with what he is doing, we are unable to think of him as a successful person. My own experience is a compelling example of this. My uncle is very rich because he is a CEO of the lucrative restaurant company. It has 30 stores in Japan and employs 300 people. Many people may envy him, but I do not think he has a successful life. He has been so busy that he divorced and lost his family. As a result, he lives alone in a narrow apartment and he is not so healthy because of daily overtime working. He confessed to me that in fact he really wanted to be a doctor, but as the company grows, it got difficult for him to change the direction of life. As this example shows, richness does not necessarily mean a successful life. Whether he was satisfied with his way of life or not, matters.

Secondly, some people who earned a lot of money without efforts does not have enough confidence as a successful person. For instance, a friend of mine is a trader. When Japan was struggled with serious recession and the value of foreign currencies were increasing, he earned a lot of money with no efforts. He owned a great number of US dollars because of his job, which increased his assets of Japanese Yen. Also, before many people bought bitcoins he had bought a lot of bitcoin. However, he had done it not because he was convinced that the value of bitcoins would increase, but because he misunderstood that bitcoin could be used as a borderless currency after reading an article of fake news. He would not be rich if he were not so lucky. As a result, although he was not smart or courageous, he got rich. He thought that he does not worth being rich and does not regard himself as a successful person. He does not have any confidence because he will not be able to repeat any outcome without luck.

This example shows that richness does not necessarily mean a successful life. Whether he was confident with his ability or not, matters.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that in order to spend a successful life, how much money someone earns is less important than how someone thinks about what someone accomplished. This is because richness does not necessarily mean a successful life. After all, whether he was satisfied with his way of life or not and whether he was confident with his ability or not, are important.

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