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Talking of making an important change in my school, I`d like to suggest that our education put more emphasis on

TOEFL Essay Topic 141 - If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Author: ANONYMOUS | Date: September 8, 2006 | Score:5

Talking of making an important change in my school, I`d like to suggest that our education put more emphasis on learning skills and theory application instead of simply on book-knowledge. The proposal is based on the reasons as follows.For one thing, overemphasis on scholaristic learning pose...

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