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External influence and inner deficiency

Ever since the accelerated development of human civilization, the discovery of human itself has become a hot issue. There is a widely saying goes, though human now have the ability to control their own life, they tend to spend more of the time on personal enjoyment rather than what the society need them to do, […]

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Working vs personal fun time

Some people think that most of the people in my country perform their duty enough because they work hard, pay taxes and make children get an education, all of them are the three primary duty in my country. Others claim that many people spend their time in their leisure, not their duty because we can […]

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Arts is more important

The debate over whether arts is more important than science has been raging for some time. Some deem that science such mathematics makes a difference on students’ intellectual development. However, I would say the exact opposite—for three reasons. First, studying arts such as history and literature will improve our critical thinking. Different from science, there […]

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Personal enjoyment

Nowadays, there is a controversial debate about spending time on personal enjoyment or important tasks. Some youth prefer to follow their hobbies and have some fun times whereas adults believe that children have some responsibilities which need their attention. In my opinion a balance between work and rest is a subtle point we should notice. […]

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Money and Memory

How do you spend it, if you receive an unexpected sum of money from somebody? There are whole bunch of ways that one can spend money. Some people will spend it to buy something that will keep “physical memory” over the long time. Some people, however, want to spend it in the enjoyment which provides […]

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writing correction

The above statement poses a hot topic on contradiction of people’s personal enjoyments and responsibilities. And the speaker tends to think people now are dedicating more on personal likeness than on what they should do. I strongly disagree with this opinion because I think that to pursue one’s individual enjoyment does not contradict to assume […]