TOEFL Essay Topic 23 - In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
Author: DD | Date: December 21, 2017 | Score: 5
Some people think that students should earn money to reduce the financial burden of their parents, while others think that students should approach their studies with diligence and care. In my opinion, students spend their time studying rather than working. I feel this way for two reasons, which ...
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Today there are some teenagers who have jobs while they are still students. There are some people who agree with that, whereas others do not agree. In my opinion, to work while they are still in school is good idea. I have two reasons to support my perspective.
First, I think all students have to do is to study several kinds of things, and they can learn precious things which are not taught at schools to have jobs. Actually I was working at a small company while I was teenager and I was taught how to run a company well by the president. Off course, teachers at schools do not tell us such things because they mainly teach academic subjects.
Second, there are many people who can not afford to go to school with financial reasons, but they can go schools by earning some money. One of my friends abandoned the hope that he will become a cock by going to schools and now he wasted a lot of time by doing silly things. I think he should have worked at some place to study. Some people may say that there is no need to study while they work and they should go schools after having jobs and finishing stocking enough money to pay tuition. In my view, people should study in their young time because they have the energy to learn many subjects.
In summary, I suggest teenagers that they have to have jobs while they are still in students.Read more