Study with diligence

TOEFL Essay Topic 23 - In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

Author: DD | Date: December 21, 2017 | Score: 5

Some people think that students should earn money to reduce the financial burden of their parents, while others think that students should approach their studies with diligence and care. In my opinion, students spend their time studying rather than working. I feel this way for two reasons, which ...

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Jobs for teenages Score: 4 May 17th, 2018 by vernon brown

There are some things to consider when thinking about education students. Different people will have different opinions whether or not teenagers should work while they are still students. While some people may think having jobs prepares young people for the real world later on, I do not think the way. In my opinion, having jobs for teenagers who are students have some disadvantages for it; being difficult to take the time to study, too young to taking responsibility in society, and damage to their health.

First, if teenagers will start to work with going to university, they would be hard to study. For example, my father so hard works everyday that often go back home midnight. I believe students should concentrate on study only because the effort will ensure their successful future. If young people have jobs, they could not study hard because they also have to do regardless of their school assignments.

Having jobs for teenage students not only bad affect their study, also is damage their health. This is because young people who have jobs have to work until midnight and take tests in their college. I think the students get too much stress both from their jobs and colleges, and led to cause serious diseases because of that. Therefore, Having jobs can be harmful to young people who are students.

Finally, I believe that teenagers are too young to take responsibility as an adult in society. Young people have little experience so they do not know well how to move in this world. Thus, if they have jobs even though they are still student, some troubles might cause so many times. This is risky both young people and their company.

In conclusion, having jobs for teenagers who are still students can be harmful in some ways. For instance, they cannot concenturate on their study, they tend to damage their health and mental from the stress both their callege and job, and they are not enough to work as an adult in society. For these reasons, I disagree with the statement.

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