Study with diligence

TOEFL Essay Topic 23 - In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

Author: DD | Date: December 21, 2017 | Score:5

Some people think that students should earn money to reduce the financial burden of their parents, while others think that students should approach their studies with diligence and care. In my opinion, students spend their time studying rather than working. I feel this way for two reasons, which ...

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Should students work while they are still students? Score: 3 October 12th, 2017 by Hisahiro Ikari

Should students work while they are still students? Some people claim that they should not, while others argue that they should. As far as I am concerned, I strongly believe that students should not have jobs while they are still students.
First and foremost, all the students have a right to concentrate on studying, but having jobs often disturbs students' studying. For example, when I was a freshman, I had a part-time job and worked more than 30 hours per week. At that time, I could not study at all, and consequently failed a couple of classes. I understood that part-time job was having harmful role for my college life, and quit it. I have seen many people who made a same mistake as me. As the above example illustrates, I strongly believe that having jobs is harmful for students.
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In conclusion, I am convinced, for the reasons mentioned above, that students should not have jobs while they are still students.

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