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Staying healthy

TOEFL Essay Topic 141 - If you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Author: aluara | Date: July 27, 2011 | Score:2.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=

Staying healthy

Staying healthy it is a very exellen conditions that makes person feel happy and have fun. This one can develops human’s sprititual condition, helps to feel harmony as well.Alsoto stay healthy means to stay modern

From the begining, when person stays healthy he helps himself.More over, human’s life longer last longer if people do sport. In the same way the staying healthy is a good opprtunity to make new friends. For example, people can meet new ones at the gym class and hava a lot of fun together. Also to stay healthy means to no waste person’s time. During the exercises humans are busy. In the same way, staying healthy make a goof mood and much energy that supports person the hole day. The developing new nessesary skills and having a srong beatiful body the are other one good advantages to be healthy as well.

On the other hand not staying healthy can develop many problems and disadvantages. Firtsly, people become more lazy . Secondly , the result of not to staying healthy people can be physically weak. The reason of it that our body
and every muscles inside it need to train to be strong. The disesas can be result of it. Then, the lack of doing exercises can develop the depression.

From my point of view, the staying healthy is a very helpfull. As a person who prefers life full of sport I can say that sport changes my life in a remarkable way. I feel much energy, become more optimistic and justenjoy every day in my life. I follow sprt strategies and theese helps me to fit it.

People stay healthy! Not be a lazy! Any pills and doctors cannot cure ourselfes better as the way to be healhthy . Everything is in our hands!!!!!!!!!




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