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TOEFL Essay Topic 92 - Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Author: sadajin | Date: April 30, 2016 | Score:4.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=

Sport and social activity as important as library

Today, stress is one of the conventional diseases among people that are known as the age disease. Infact, it is known among people that whoever takes a higher risk is able to make more money. So, the direct relationship between higher risk and loading more money is hacked in all minds. However, this question is asked about the worth of money which has been provided by higher risk job. Clearly, there are some doubts that money which has been made by taking more risk, worth to sacrify some aspects of health. Therefore, two perspectives have been emerged in this issue. First group of people believe that it does not matter how much money can be earn while you are not able to enjoy it. On the other hand, another group is adventurous to find more money by taking high risk job. Actually, they firmly believe that making money is interesting and taking high risk job is really exciting to them. In my point of view, nothing is worthier than health. This essay is providing some reasons supporting my view.

The first reason that comes to mind is that although there is a direct relationship between more money and taking high risk job, there is also another direct relationship between disease and high risk job. To explain it more clearly, it should not be forgotten that money is useful and interesting when human is healthy. Nothing can worth, while people are not able to enjoy using this. This is due to this fact that several mental and physical illnesses are derived from stress. Clearly, according to the latest reports, when someone is under pressure, the body burns more energy and release more amount hormones. Some types of this hormones damage some parts of brain and healthy tissues. For example, MS disease, which is recognizes as a dangerous illness, is caused by stress. Actually, it is common among people who are taking high risk job.

The second reason worth to be mention is that stress avoids people to concentrate on people around them. So, they are not able to enjoy of their life and after passing a short time they will stay alone completely. This is due to this fact that high risk job; usually ask them to devote more time and energy. Ultimately, they cannot find any spare time to be happy and be with their family and friends.

Inconclusion, base what was mentioned above it can be found that high risk job does not worth to lose health and it is not that much worthy to devote whole of our time and money to this. It is better to take a lower risk job and do not put life in danger and not to lose friends and family. Actually, this point is really significant to articulate that people should work and make money to enjoy using this, not to live because of working and making money.




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