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TOEFL Essay Topic 52 - What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Changes to make my hometown more appealing to people my age Score:4.5 August 13th, 2016 by
As a young person, I am of the opinion that changes brought about by the provision of facilities to make us prepare for the future and also keep us engaged would certainly make my hometown more app... Read more
No title Score:4.5 March 7th, 2016 by
My hometown would probably benefit from lots of changes that could make it more attractive for young people . I would argue that cleaning the garbage ,good transportation system,and well controlle... Read more
changes in my hometown Score:4 January 10th, 2016 by
My hometown is Osaka. It is a very developed city in Japan. Some people think that Osaka should become as big as Tokyo, the capital city in Japan. Although it is important to make Osaka strong, I p... Read more
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the change we would like to do! Score:3.5 November 29th, 2015 by
Every person would like to live in better, clean and have good neighbours hometown. As far as I concerned we are responsible people to keep our hometown to be a bettter place in the first place. I... Read more
I hail from Otuo in Edo State, Nigeria. I spent my childhood in my village, where i had a lot of friends. We enjoyed playing a lot of games, especially swimming in the river. Sometimes we go to the... Read more
Important change in town Score:4 July 14th, 2015 by
If i could change one important thing in my town i would provide all modren facilities that enhance the life of people of my town. That amenties will be modren library and WIFI and gym centers. The... Read more
Lovely hometown Score:5.5 June 25th, 2015 by
It is widely accepted that our today's world is replete with how to improve living conditions and one imperative way to achieving this goal is to make hometown appealing. Some people may hold the v... Read more
Welcome to dynamic and clean K-pop city Score:4.5 April 5th, 2015 by
How would my hometown, South Korea be more appealing to young generations in all over the Asia? From my own point of view, I believe understanding their needs and interests is the most important th... Read more
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City Changes Score:4 March 25th, 2015 by
Although cities in my home country appear to be populated only by elderly people and suitable only for their quiet life, there are a number of changes that could make my hometown more appealing to ... Read more
Bleeding boredom Score:5 March 1st, 2015 by
I am in the age frame where us youngsters have adrenaline rush quite too often. It is almost as natural as any other nature's call. We need something exciting to do, be it hiking or mountain climbi... Read more
Playground-Come one, Come all Score:5.5 February 6th, 2015 by
There are several changes needed in my locality. First, a playground is a must in the community. Second, proper drainage system is also a necessity. Third, a restaurant would be appreciated in the ... Read more
parents Score:4.5 December 9th, 2014 by
The parents play an important role in our live. They a basic stone to built our personality and our manner in this world some people agree with this statement. Others disagree. In my opinion, I str... Read more
hometown more appealing-Essay2 Score:3.5 November 28th, 2014 by
I will give my opinion in the following essay about the changes I find that would make my hometown more appealing to young people and would complement the current offering.To start with, I enco... Read more
Appealing to Young People Score:5 November 1st, 2014 by
There are many factor that promotes the development of a city, and in my opinion, the improvement in education, in natural environment as well as in public welfare will guarantee my hometown being ... Read more
What change would make your hometown more appealing to peopl Score:5.5 October 25th, 2014 by
Truth be told, my hometown is an excellent place to live in many aspect such as having a lot of green and beautiful environment, sport club, hospital, schools to name but only a handful. However, i... Read more
rio Score:5 May 2nd, 2014 by
Improving the town should aim to reach teenager's demands. The maintenance of the sidewalk, building more place for the amusement and the libraries would are fine way for this.The improvement o... Read more
two edged sword issue Score:5 March 24th, 2014 by
There are several approaches about what should my hometown's city council members do to attract the new comers? Some people state that they should change the touristic places like seaside, historic... Read more
recreational places to attract young people Score:4.5 January 30th, 2014 by
My hometown is a large industrialized city that has pretty much everything. But it is really easy to get bored here as it has not many organized entertainment facilities and places. On weekends, it... Read more
No title Score:4 November 22nd, 2013 by
Work is the most important part of our lives. It helps us marry and buy homes, cars, etc. Some people believe that talents or interests are the most important factors in choosing our jobs. I am str... Read more
Essay: Changes to hometown Score:5.5 October 15th, 2013 by
Hometown is such a place where everyone at some point of his/her life wishes to introduce some changes and effectively make it attractive and pleasing to the inhabitants. It is sort of leaving behi... Read more
dddddddd Score:2 August 2nd, 2013 by
As an old saying goes “The water bears the boat is the same that drowns it up.” In other words, every issue has it own advantages and disadvantages. While some people claim that a government sh... Read more
Basic Change Needs For Hometown In My Age Score:4 July 9th, 2013 by
Hometown is the most important thing for youths as me, Because it can affect my life by it's facilities. For youths quality of educational places and abundant places for spending times in such a go... Read more
olleges and universities must do a better job of preparing s Score:1.5 March 13th, 2013 by
In my opinion, colleges and universities have to assist their students to prepare for their future jobs. Schools should offer courses helping students to find their interests and plan their future... Read more
Change in your home town Score:4 November 30th, 2012 by
The topic of people's views on making your hometown more appealing, there are a variety of point of view to be analyzed. Some people tend to think that building a amusement park could be a better o... Read more
modern changes of my town Score:4.5 April 1st, 2012 by
Everyone man in the world likes his hometown where he was born grew up. It is like home where you know every angle and track on which during your life you were walking with friends or were playing ... Read more
An appealing city. Score:4.5 February 22nd, 2012 by
In modern days, teenagers of my age often expect their life to be expedient and full of multi stimulations to make their tedious daily agenda much more colorful and exciting. The metropolis I'm liv... Read more
No title Score:5 February 13th, 2012 by
Everything in this world needs changing for development, and improvement. Personally, I truly believe that if I am ever given the chance to change one thing in my hometown, I would change illuminat... Read more
How I make my hometown better. Score:3.5 February 3rd, 2012 by
There are several things that these should be better to change to suit for my generation, around eighty years old. In reality, we often annoy about certain issue in our daily life. So if I can al... Read more
change makes hometown appealing to people your age Score:6 October 14th, 2011 by
I am a 20 something girl live in Taipei, Taiwan. I love my city very much because it has convenient public transportation, exotic cuisine every where, and full of libraries and book stores. Althoug... Read more
A Change to My Hometown—-Building a New School Score:4.5 September 21st, 2011 by
My hometown situates in a mountain area far from the downtown with inconvenient transportation. Sometime the kids have to climb two hours mountain to go to school. Also it isolates from the world o... Read more
September 21, 2011