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useful in many aspects

August 25th, 2015

Some argues scandals are useful in attract people's attraction better than others while others may think scandals are ugly because their ill-will. Though scandal may really have several disadvantages but, in my opinion, they have several benefits in reformation.

not order but encourage

August 25th, 2015

Some people argues the universities should order students learn various courses outside their major in order to make them truly educated while others may think students should focus on their major. What is the duty of the universities? How many knowledge does a student need to become well-educated? In my opinion, the college should not give orders to their student but encourage them to attend learning outside their own field.

alternative explanations

August 24th, 2015

The recommendation in the argument says Acme Publishing Company should use the Easy Read Speed-Reading Course in order to improve the employee's ability of getting information because of several evidences. But close scrutiny of these evidences reveals these could not prove the worthiness of the course.

not enough reason

August 23rd, 2015

The argument says the UltraClean liquid soap should apply to all hand-washing stations because of its usefulness in laboratory and in hospital. But close scrutiny of its statements reveals that there are several questions about the argument.

mainly object

August 23rd, 2015

Some argues that the government should require students to learn the same. It is undeniable that national curriculum will make college easier to know what they can expect to their future freshmen and make schools before college have less duty. In my opinion, though some national curriculum--mainly in primary schools--are helpful, more such courses will circumscribe the creativeness of both students and teachers.

alternative explanantion

August 23rd, 2015

The argument thinks the new club will gain a lot of money because of owning of local market, popular in Monroe and preference to spend money nationwide. But, after scrutinizing all its statements which lead to its conclusion, it reveals that all its evidences full of questions.

alternative reasons

August 23rd, 2015

The argument advices all schools should adopt honor codes because of rising of cheating and success of honor code in reducing cheating. After scrutinizing all the evidences in the arguments like teacher's report and students' survey, it is implausible to get the assumption that the code is successful and, thus, should be applied by all schools.

alternative explanations

August 23rd, 2015

The advice in the memorandum seems plausible. It says that, because of decline of audience, drop in sales of music records, population growth mainly in retirees and increasing interest in news and talk, KNOW radio station should alter their format to meet the needs of new residents in order to reverse decline. But close scrutiny to all these evidences reveals that the shift in format may not guarantee the growth in audience.

Alternative explanation

August 23rd, 2015

The explanation of accidents seems plausible. As there are more accidents in the Quiot factory, we should follow the example of nearby factory to shorter our shift because experts sat fatigue and sleep deprivation contributes to on-the-job accidents. However, close scrutiny reveals that such evidences lead little support to the argument.

needs clear restirction

August 20th, 2015

Some argues that laws should flexible to suit different environment. According to my point of view, it is necessary to make laws suitable for various circumstances while it should have enough clearness and execution by true people.

not save every

August 20th, 2015

Some argues that it is little reason to save endangered species when needs great efforts. I think there are much reasons courage me to save animals. It is certain for me that there should not pay too much sources on saving every endangered plants and animals but, in my opinion, it is necessary to save endangered animals which will affect human or environment a lot whatever its cost.

superior in future

August 19th, 2015

Some argues that human can always superior than human. In my opinion, though, currently, human can superior than computer in most aspects other than calculating and storing, it has great possibility that computer will superior than human in most aspects in future.

less restriciton

August 19th, 2015

Some argues government should place restrictions on development while others think there should less bans on research as few as possible. For me, it is true that people or organizations that have power should place some restrictions on scope of new tech. But, in my opinion, I would prefer to set few limitations.

ill logic

August 19th, 2015

In the memo, the manager advices to use manmade butter instead of real one in whole U.S., because of the evidence of the use in the some areas have little complaint. After scrutinize his statements, there several troubles is his conduction and evidences.

lexical density

August 15th, 2015

The planner thinks Grandview Symphony (GS) could self-supporting because they have income raise is other aspects except government assist, and thus they advise to stop funding GS. After scrutinize their evidences, we can find they need to answer several questions to proof their recommendation will get predicted result.

revise old

August 15th, 2015

The president argues allowing boys to apply to this school while others disagree with this advice. Though both part have some reasons and these reasons seemed convincible, after scrutinize these statements, neither could totally support their recommendation.

-cold-company-other

August 15th, 2015

The advice showed in the argument seems reasonable. As mentioned in the argument, winter will turn colder and population growth will lead to increase demand of oil which will benefit Consolidated Industries (CI). But after close scrutinize these statements and their links, we will find no evidences could lead to assumption that CI will profit.

take a part-time job

December 28th, 2014

When talking about how parents could help their teenager to prepare their adult life, there are various ways to do so. One of these ways is to encourage teenage children to take a par -time job. In fact, I can hardly agree with this opinion because there are many other ways to help them prepare to be an adult and take a part-time job is not the best one according to my opinion.

friend with fun or help us

December 25th, 2014

Nowadays, people always have various types of friends. Some friends can have fun with us while some can help us when we are in difficulties with some others always point out our faults what make us unhappy. Some people think we should make friends with those who can make us happy while others prefer to make friends with people who can really help us. According to my own preference, I would like to make friends with those who can really help me when I am in need.

fact or idea/concept

December 25th, 2014

Nowadays, students need to learn various courses in school. Some people think students should learn facts before they understand ideas and concepts while other people think it is more important for students to know concepts than facts. In my own opinion, there are nothing different between learning facts and understanding ideas and concepts which I refer to both are necessary for students to understand.

new or old friend

December 24th, 2014

It is unthinkable to live a life without friends. To many people, they are often weighted by how many friends they have. In this situation, some people suggested that we should make as many friends as we can, while some people think we should pay most attention on maintaining relationships with old friends. In my opinion, we cannot say there is any form of them more important than the other one which I refer to the meaning that we cannot live without any form of them.

show audience good people rewarded bad people punish

December 23rd, 2014

Movies and televisions are often with the end of good people being rewarded and bad people being punished. But this is not always true, some movies often told us there still many veils in this world that is not be punished. For this reason I cannot agree with the statement that movies and television should always show audience that good people are being pride and guilty are being punished.

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