TOEFL Essay Topic 33 - You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
People make money for living first and then use the money for other things which lead them to a happy
People make money for living first and then use the money for other things which lead them to a happy and healthy life, such as buying something they like, watching a movie, eating a big meal. In my opinion, if I have received a gift of money, I would like to buy a ticket to a concert.
For me, music is always attactive. When I have completed a whole day`s study or finished the discussion on some academic problems, my spirit will be eager to relax for a while. When people want to relax, it is a wonderful thing to go to a concert: the music playing on the concert is the best thing to set your mind free. If you spend the money to listen to a concert, you will fell that the cost is valuable.
In addition, you can attend the concert accompanying with your friends. It is a good chance to build up the relationship between your friends and you. People are always busy with their work and study, losing many occasions of communicating with each other, a splendid concert and link us together. The music, the supervisor and all the musicians on the concert can offer us a common topic, we can discuss that things together.
Furthermore, listening to a concert let me learn more about music and all kinds of instruments, it also culture the appreciatory ability. To think that I spend the money to buy a piece of jewelry, I can acquire nothing but being a little bit beautiful at one of my friend`s birthday parties. In that case, I just fell that the money has gone.
Money, even a little money, can make your life more valuable, for this reason, I prefer to buy a ticket to a concert than to a piece of jewelry.
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