TOEFL Essay Topic 66 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child`s success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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there are some people belive that Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child`s success in school.they are truth with this value and depend on this princeble in there conecteing in life.
when we chose betwen this or that, we put some values to decide what we choose.from this value we conseder with naboure in our home and classmates in class to our children becouse classmates have imagen influence to other children like that story we know a bad appel which influence on good appels in the same pasket.in addition that the same age to children is reason a compare with other to get the better or worse one in the calss.so the child when conect with a good classmate he will be good.
when we think about influence parents on child .we find it almost nothing becous it is no time to spend with child so it is no conect btwen them. even if there are any talking, there are order from parents to chiled and it must be doing with out descuse.this is bad enveronment to grawing good relationship with others.
so i am agree with this statement which sutable with our defficult condetion.but if the parents can spend part time of day with child in play like football or in talking about any thing interesting or in watching t.v together or any thing eals could be all enjoyable,i think child influence from parents more than classmate.
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