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New improvement in community!

TOEFL Essay Topic 165 - You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

Author: sagar_99 | Date: June 24, 2016 | Score: 4.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=

New improvement in community!

If someone say me to spend several hours of my time to improve one thing in my community then I would definitely choose to build children park In our community, and it’s very necessary. My choice for build this park is based on following three reasons.

First, there is no garden or free plot nearby in our community in the first place. So I want to build one children park in the center of my community. Fortunately, people who living with me are very good and helpful, hence I though that we have one place or garden where people can meet each other at the end of the day and share their feeling and love among them. In fact, the idea of park will prove very great in the sense of location. Our community is in circular shape so center of our are is great place to meeting and even useful to held some events!

Second, In my community children does not have option to play with friends and they feel anxious with living all the day in home and playing indoor games. Besides, children park can provide them enough space to play games like cricket,soccer, hide and seek etc. Apparently, fresh air and beauty of trees, flowers and green grass could create better atmosphere. This kind of place is very comfortable for old people and youth as well. This kind of place can be fortify the relationship and support, because people meets everyday and feel free.

Last but not least, a new children park could have lots of other benefits like community support, event organization, festival celebration etc. Needless to say, there is no harm and drawback of park, In addition valuation of the houses could be uplifted because location. If new family arrive then they could get support and needed information in meeting at evening.

In conclusion, I would like to say that the idea of children park is worthy and my given hours of effort would yield as community’s convenience. So I love this idea and make my living place better that ever before!


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