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Never, never give up

TOEFL Essay Topic 40 - The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Author: hirohirobo | Date: October 3, 2015 | Score:3.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=

Never, never give up

First, I have a friend Matui that always did his best, when he was a high school student. He want to be a doctor and need good grades. He often did not get much sleep. One day, he had a heavy sick which needs surgery. After the surgery, he lost his consciousness and many his friends and his parents had crying. Today, he recover his body and he can enjoy ordinary life, however he could not became the doctor. I think that “Never, never give up” is important to get success, but we must not always do our best because it also cause bad effect.

Second, I watched the TV show that explained how we can get good life style, 2 weeks ago. According to the research, we need relaxing time while the working and studying. In general, people is continuously able to concentrate one things only 30 minutes long. That is why, I realized that there is time limit to do something with effect.

Third, I think that it is important to escape as well as to do effort. when I was high school student, I belonged to sailing club. The training is strictly, my coworker retire the club. but I had never give up. I woke up at 5 am everyday to support my friend. However, everyone retire the club. Eventually, I should quit the club and find other sport club more earlier.




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