TOEFL Essay Topic 6 - If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
My hometown is a famous city in China. It is famous because it is one of the oldest city in
My hometown is a famous city in China. It is famous because it is one of the oldest city in China and even in the world. I love my city very much. If something I could change, I wonder is the weather.
I travelled a lot, not only in China, but also around the world. Compare to all the cities I have been to, I like my hometown the most. However, there is one thing I do not like that much is the weather. It is too hot in summer time, and too cold in winter time. One reason for me to travel a lot is that it is too hot in summer. The arevage temperature in my hometown in summer time is 38 degree Celsius. Most of the time the temperature is above it. On another hand, in winter time, the arevage temperature in my hometown is -6 degree Celsius. It is not that cold for most of the Canada cities but compare for the 38 degree Celsius, it is cold.
In my opinion, in winter time, it is better than summer. If some families do not have good heating, they can just wear many cloths. But summer time, even they are naked, they still feel hot. In my home, I have air condition. It is much better, but still not good because I could not get fresh air. However, most of the people`s home do not have air condition. Those people just can stay in some shopping moor for whole day and almost every summer, the air condition will sell out for all the shopping center in the hottest time in my city. One of my friends live in abroad for a long time. One summer, he came back to visit his relations. He told me that he can not breath in outside because the air is hot.
The living condition in my city become better and better. The people who live in my city feel happy and happy. But, if the weather will be better and better, I think the people will be more happy then right now.