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Make a decision

TOEFL Essay Topic 55 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Author: starfield1121 | Date: March 17, 2017 | Score:4.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=

Make a decision

People sometimes have to make a very significant decision that change their lives. Some people say that they should make such determinants by themselves since they relate directly to them. However, I strongly believe that people should never make an important decision alone. I have some reasons to support my opinion.

First and foremost, the staple decision that alters their lives is very difficult to determine so they often make a mistake. For instance, there are sometimes two ways that seem attractive to a person. I had two dreams when I was a high school student. I wanted to be both a doctor and a musician, and I know that making both of my wishes come true was almost impossible, but I don’t know which dream I should seek. I discuss my dream with my family and realize that to be a doctor is a better choice. Although it seemed easy question to my family, I was in trouble deciding at that time. If I chose the way to be a musician, I might go on a completely different way.

Second, others can give you a helpful advice in making an important decision. Continuing thinking alone sometimes do not produce a good result. For example, many people ask for consultants to solve difficult questions. A friend of mine who is a attrony of a famous company said that the company always ask him for advice when making a decision like which place it should build factories or with which company it should tag. Since these questions can change the company’s fate completely and it regards the questions important, it asks other people for their opinion.

In conclusion, I consider that people should depend on others in making a significant decision. This is because the choices are difficult to make by themselves and others can supply profitable advice.




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