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Kazakhstan’s land

TOEFL Essay Topic 181 - In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Author: Galiya | Date: May 4, 2012 | Score:3.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=

Kazakhstan’s land

Kazakhstan is very big country. Which has many deserts and steps. I think we more need for land to be developed just for industry. It will contribute development of Kazakhstan.

On one hand, Kazakhstan rich in minerals country. Mainly, deposit located in deserts and steps. We can build there oil, peat, coal and mercury factories. That will be great for our country’s development. Moreover, it can reach a new level in the World ranking.
Or we can build wind mills. They produce clean energy. That is benefit from every point of view. In European countries wind mills very widespread. If Kazakhstan start to build that and use that, it will be great for country’s development.

On the other hand, Kazakhstan doesn’t have big population. Because of it, we don’t need developed land for housing. Our cities grows as fast as it is necessary.

To summarize, Kazakhstan need land for develop for industry. But only if that would be ecological. Sometimes when government decide to build some factories, our population suffer, or poison from emissions and waste. Thus, I think that development can be and should be sustainable and beneficial in all possible ways.




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