TOEFL Essay Topic 185 - You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
It seems, in two items, very difficult to prefer one to another because all of them have their advantages and
It seems, in two items, very difficult to prefer one to another because all of them have their advantages and disadvantages to the extent that it is hard to distinguish.
Yet that does not mean they are of the same to me. To be frank, I would prefer making use of money to run my own business if personal quality is considered as a criterion to choose things.
Then why I prefer purchasing a business? I like it because it can make more money apparently, thus make me not only be able to process better-qualified house but also attain more and better life pleasure. Maybe I will run my own computer software company in order to achieve my childhood ideal. Or running a fashion shop is also not bad choice with my friends. In brief, through running the business can make more profits than only buying a house and meet my desire.
There is another reason why I choose to get into my business by money, in terms of my personality. I like challenge that the atmosphere of business brings to me. According to my consideration and my family and friends` appraisal, outgoing and social personality are my most pronounced features. I want to employ these advantages to create an utterly new me in the competitive business environment. No wonder, it again brings me confidence that I cannot get if I choose to purchase a house.
That last reason is that I can make a contribution to the society by paying the tax to the government. We live in the society, and we get all kinds of useful resources from it, so I think I should return the society by my effort instead of enjoying the life in that private house.
In conclusion, everybody wants to choose the one that fits him/her. So, it is of great benefits of me to choose to run my own business by money.