TOEFL Essay Topic 23 - In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
In some countries, teenagers used to have job while they are still students, but many other advanced countries have a
In some countries, teenagers used to have job while they are still students, but many other advanced countries have a negative attitude.
According to my opinion it is much better for teenagers to not work while they are in college. This opinion I am basing on some reasons.
First of all, I consider when teenager has to work and at the same time need to get some knowledge, he (she) cannot concentrate well on his subject, and he is often simply tired. This condition isn’t well for studying. I am sure, if teenagers have to work after school, they don’t have enough time for good preparation for studies and their knowledge progress. I believe that for teenagers it is better to concentrate on their studies and to make a good foundation for their future. Also, I think young people are adopting knowledge more easily than adults. So, this age is really the right time for hard studying.
When teenagers work, they may loose time for sleep rest and this is not best way, because they body are growing up and this might hurt their health. In some cases, teenagers who work and have some savings can use their money for not good thing like cigarettes, drugs or alcohols. Some more reason why is bad for teenagers to have a job because they don’t have enough of professionalism and responsibility. Shortage of knowledge might become as result bad working. In Russia, for example, it is not usually for teenagers have a job. I was living in Russia and I really can say, progress in studies there much effective than in countries where students have a job, because the first one can fully to spare the time for studies.
Based on the above discussion, I hold the opinion, I disagree that teenagers can have a job during they are students because it might be as result not effective studying.
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