TOEFL Essay Topic 23 - In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
In some countries, teenagers have bobs while they are still students. I think that this is a good idea, because
In some countries, teenagers have bobs while they are still students. I think that this is a good idea, because it encourages teenagers to lead their life, it pushes them to a realistic work environment, and they can earn their own money.
First of all, it encourages teenagers to lead their life. For instance, most of jobs need regular schedules to finish on time. He or she must complete the work, or they will be fired. Furthermore, a regular schedule lets teenagers work more effectively. For example, they must use time very well that they can control the progresses normally.
In addition, having a job while teenagers are still students can expose they to realistic work environment. For example, comparing the assignment of school to the mission on the job, teenagers must face with the bosses’ demand, and what they can do is not nothing but obey the companies’ policies. Furthermore, the work environment may influence the way teenagers’ dressing and speaking. For instance, they should learn how to wear formal dress, because they must contact the customers. A polite and courteous speaking is as important as the dressing. For giving a good impression with superiors and customers, they are asked with(by??) speaking politely.
Finally, they can earn their own money. For instance, the can save money to pay what they want in the future. Moreover, how to use the money seems a lesson for teenagers. For instance, they can invest anything that can make their money much. (that can them earn much money. ??) Such things let they have financial independences the their parents will not be worry about the life of their children.
In summary, if teenagers have jobs while they are students, it will let they lead their life, and push them to a realistic work environment. Furthermore, they can earn their money, which can help they life by themselves. For all these reasons, I think that this is a good idea for teenagers to have jobs while they are still students.
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