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If I have this honor I think I would like to change the climate of my hometown.I do not make

TOEFL Essay Topic 6 - If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

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If I have this honor I think I would like to change the climate of my hometown.I do not make

If I have this honor I think I would like to change the climate of my hometown.I do not make this decision because the climate of my hometown is seriously bad,on the contrary I like the climate quit well except one thing that we must burn something for warmth in winter to fight against the cold weather.

In winter,it is always about 30 centigrade under the ice point,and we must gain enough warmth to keep the cold weather outside our rooms.Commonly we burn coal for warmth.You know burning coal will contaminate the air of the city.When the coal is burning it will give off the tiny dust which may float in the air for a long time.So in winters it is not strange to see a grey-blue sky above our city.If I can change the climate of our city I will make the winter warm as spring.That is enough for the residants.For they do not have to burn coal for warmth any more.And the sky would be more blue than it was before.

Another reason is we need not clean snow in winter if I can change it.Snow is in large amount in my hometown.It makes the road slippery and drives in winter road is dangerouse because the fallen snow.To decress this danger residants must spend a lot in cleaning it.Even though can the drivers not commit the accidents during the snowing season.So if the climat is changed and no more snow in winter is appreciated.

The last but not least reason is if I can change the climate and make winter warm like spring I can swin in the river besides my hometown.It is great for me because I like swimming very much.Although swimming in winter river sounds cool but I can never contrive it.

All in all,if I am capable of make a variation of my hometown I will change the climate of my home town for it is too cold in winter.And the changed climate is more pretty.




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