TOEFL Essay Topic 185 - You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
If I could gain so much money, no matter where it came from, I would buy a bussiness rather than
If I could gain so much money, no matter where it came from, I would buy a bussiness rather than a house. This decision is made by many reasons from my points of view which I will explain all of them below.
Business can produce things much more than do a house alone. First it can generate so much money that I can buy everything I want such as car computer or even a house.In contrast, the house can not make any money for me so I can not get anything more if I choose to buy it.
When I have a bussiness of my own, I also have a job and this job will provide me a lot of opportunities and experince I never have before. I can use this advantage to create other businesses and gain more money so this will be a very profitable cycle to make money and improve yourself, including your skill or effectiveness.
Not only producing many thing for myself , but business can also give the others opportunities. It can make the work or positions for people who are vacant or losing their jobs, then again, business itself produce money for other persons who run this business with me , or so called my employees.
Lastly, I like to travel around the country and the world. If this business is international thus I have chances to travel and work at the same time. This will make me very happy. I will collect the knowledege from traveling to improve my business in the mean time.
As I repeatly said above, I prefer buying a business to a house because the business itself can give me not only the money but also opportunity to travel, work or job, experiences and giving others chance or jobs. It will be better if I can be a happy woman and the people around me can get this feeling as well.
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