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I totally agree with the idea that the Internet provide us a lot of valuable and precious information by following

TOEFL Essay Topic 84 - Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Author: gakusama | Date: October 5, 2016 | Score:5

I totally agree with the idea that the Internet provide us a lot of valuable and precious information by following reasons.First, through the Internet we can access enormous knowledge, not costing too much money. The value of information is the very important part of our lives because when we...

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