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I oppose close relationships with pets

TOEFL Essay Topic 182 - Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Author: cecilhsu | Date: May 4, 2011 | Score:6.5

Nowadays, more and more people regard keeping pets as a fashionable trend. The number of pet shops, pet restaurants, and even pet salons is increased considerably. Some people enjoy intimate relationships with their pets, treating them as they are an imperative part of their life. Nevertheless, o...

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Pets Score: 4 March 10th, 2018 by takashi

More and more people have pets in recent years. Some people say such an additional member of their family can stimulate their life. Others think that feeding on pet tends to become a burden on their family. In my opinion, a close relationship with pets offers a good opportunity to enhance their life, such as refreshment and enjoyable communications among pets and their family members.

First of all, a pet provides a family with recreational chances, like feeding or taking a walk with their pets. In general, all the pets enjoy their meal time similar to human beings. When it is time for eating, their looks with lots of pleasure relieve our daily life. Moreover, most popular pet, a dog requires people to take a walk, but this task also improves feeder ‘s life. People’s life in our society is mostly filled with relatively boring routine work. They have to commute to the office every day or doing a lot of housework to lead a stable life. If they have a dog and go outside for their pet, this task must release their daily stresses. By taking their pets more carefully, a pet sometimes gives a different point of view during a walk. A close relationship with pets is advantageous for leading a comfortable and relieved life in our society.

Second, having a pet stimulates the communication in a family more deeply. Of course, a pet is an animal that can not understand our language. Because of that, we try to figure out the pet’s needs or feelings. For instance, I had cast in my family and we fed on them. They sometimes seemed to want foods, playing toys or a bed but we could not understand. However, those situations increased talk not only with our pets but also among family members as well. Such indirect communication with pets nurtures affections, communication skills and strong bond with family members. A close relationship with pets has an additional good effect on a family.

Therefore, regarding their pets as a significant member of the family have a great advantage for a family. Thanks to the pets, people can obtain refreshment from daily life and profound communications with family members. Pets will play a more and more important role for human beings.

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