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How to improve education at university

TOEFL Essay Topic 87 - What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Author: Yu Ta | Date: February 28, 2017 | Score:6

How to improve education at university is always controvercial problem among government agencies related to education and universities. Some people believe that in order to improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. However, in my...

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