TOEFL Essay Topic 24 - A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.
Hello, weclome to Shanghai! I always say that when my friend come to Shanghai. it is a beautiful and active
Hello, weclome to Shanghai! I always say that when my friend come to Shanghai. it is a beautiful and active city. I have already love this city deeply, although it is not my hometown. If my friend Judy move to Shanghai and have a long time to know well about Shanghai, I am sure that she be attracted by such a lovely city.
Shanghai is an active and challenging city. New companies, new investments and new technology appear every day. It needs a lot of talent to build Shanghai, which offers a large stage to young people. This is first reason why I think Judy will like shanghai, because she just graduated from university. Shanghai will give her various of opportunities that can let her execute her dream.
In addition, Shanghai is a fashion city. This is why most young ladies choose here to live. In shanghai, you can breathe the same fashion air as in other international cities such as Tokyo, Paris and NewYork. In the large department store you can find premium clothing brands, inn the cinema you can see hot movies and in the restraunt you can taste different foods from different countries. As a fashion lover, Judy will enjoy her life very much.
Last one but not least, Shanghai is comfortable for living. Goverment invest a great amount money to improve environment and transportation in recent years. Subways and sky-trains help people arrive destinations more quickly. Green plants cover more fields than any other large cities in China. Convenient shops and large supermarket are be distrubuted at the each corner of Shanghai. When Judy live in Shanghai, she and I can go shopping together frequently.
Due to above mentioned reasons, I am sure my friend will love Shanghai as much as I do. Will you be attracted by Shanghai! I would like to say: Welcome!