TOEFL Essay Topic 51 - Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Author: Yoichiro | Date: October 31, 2016 | Score: 4.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=


Before to mention the key to success, I would like to define the word, success on this passage.
Success is to fulfill their goal in this case.
Many people want to know how to success in their life. And I think there are no answer about that question, because different people have different philosophy.One believe that success come from hard working and one believe taking risks or chances or careful planning as above passage says.
I firmly believe that strong determination is the most important key to success, I explicate the most outstanding reasons.
One reason come to mind at first is that it is important thing to make a decision speedy.
There are many people be unhappy not to make a decision quickly.
For example, when I was a high school student, I loved a girl whose name is Hanako. I loved her since I met her the first time, but I finally tell nothing about my favor to her. But recently my friends has told me that she loved me. So I regret not to decide to say anything to her.
Another noteworthy point in supporting my idea is that life is a series of determination.
So, if we hesitate to decide we will loose chances.
For example, my mother was so fat, but she stop to eat lunch.
she could loose weight. I think she want to eat something every lunch time, but she skipped it with strong determination.
The last but not least is determination is related to how we bear things.
For example, I am not good at getting up early, but I practice baseball everyday.
So now I am very good baseball player. Without the strong determination, I couldn’t got up early.
To sum up, if one were to take a cursory look at the aforementioned reasons, one would reach somber conclusion that what is the most important thing to be success. I believe that people who are decisive probably success in their life.

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