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Foreign Country Vist

TOEFL Essay Topic 156 - You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks. Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

Author: preetam | Date: October 8, 2015 | Score:3.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=

Foreign Country Vist

Visiting any foreign country is a great opportunity. Experiencing other cultures that are much different than ours makes us more considerate of other people, also these experiences enriches us human beings. If I had the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks then I would like to visit Brazil.

Coming from India, Brazil is a country which has completely different cultural background. But like India, Brazil is one of the developing countries with growing youth population. In many ways Brazil is also similar to India. There are few reasons which is why I choose Brazil.

First, Brazil is the land of Football. The country has won the World Cup 5 times, maximum among all the countries. The country is home to famous footballers like Pele, Ronaldo, Ronaldinho etc. I have only heard or read about the passion people in Brazil have for football. So, being a football fan it would be great to experience the football culture of Brazil. We all have heard stories about children playing football on beaches, streets, favelas all day long and to be able witness this firsthand would be an unique experience. Also, in my time in Brazil, I would like to visit at least one football match at the Maracana Stadium in Rio. It is one of the most iconic football stadiums in the world.

Second, natural beauty and sight seeing opportunities that Brazil offers is second to none. Brazil is home to largest rain forest in the world. It would be once in a life time opportunity to visit the amazing Amazon Rain Forest. These forests are home so many unique animals, birds and insects. Wild life at Amazon can not be compared with any other in the world. Scientists suggest there are many animal species in the deep Amazon Forest, that are yet to discovered by humans. Apart from the rain forests, Brazil is also home to some of the most famous beaches in the world. One of the most important factors in my decision was the chance to visit the famous Rio beach. Moreover, there are lot of water sports also available to try out.

These are the main reasons for me to choose Brazil. Visiting a country like Brazil not only fulfill my childhood dream of watching a football match at Maracana Stadium, also it would enrich me as a human being.




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