GMAT Essay Topic 477 - The following appeared in a memorandum to the planning department of an investment firm. "Costs have begun dropping for several types of equipment currently used to convert solar energy into electricity. Moreover, some exciting new technologies for converting solar energy are now being researched and developed. Hence we can expect that solar energy will soon become more cost efficient and attractive than coal or oil as a source of electrical power. We should, therefore, encourage investment in Solario, a new manufacturer of solar-powered products. After all, Solario's chief executive was once on the financial planning team for Ready -to-Ware, a software engineering firm that has shown remarkable growth since its recent incorporation." Discuss how well reasoned . . . Etc.
Merely based on the dubious assumption and unfounded evidence,the author concludes that they should increase the investment in Solario that is a new manufacturer of solar-powered products.To substantiate the argument ,the author indicates that the cost of the equipment currently used to convert ...
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A travel magazine article claims that Speedee Airlines is the best choice for today's business traveler. To support this claim, the author points out that Speedee has ranked first in terms of on-time arrival rate since the airline industry began requiring airlines to report their on-time rates. The claim is also based on the assertion that "Speedee now offers more flights to more destinations than ever before." This argument suffers from several critical flaws.
First of all, the claim relies on a couple of unwarranted assumptions. One assumption is that on-time rates, number of flights, and destination choices are the only features of airline service that determine how a particular airline would rank overall for a business traveler. However, the author of this article ignores other factors such as fare prices and discounts, safety record, baggage-handling, and in-flight amenities. Another assumption is that Speedee's overall on-time record affects business and non-business travelers equally. However, this is not necessarily the case. Speedee may have a poorer record for commuter flights, which are popular among business travelers, than for other flights. If so, the conclusion that Speedee is the best choice for the business traveler would be seriously undermined.
Secondly, the author's claim that "Speedee now offers more flights to more destinations than ever before" is too vague to be meaningful. We are not informed how many flights or how many destinations were previously offered or how many are offered now. Moreover, the article makes no comparison with other airlines regarding these features. Fabulous beatiful amazing charming glamorous effective eminent enormous tremendous desperating inspired educational elctronic energetic dynamic dazzling catastrophic .Without these comparisons, the claim is worthless as a reason for choosing Speedee over another airline.
Thirdly, the article fails to indicate how long ago the industry began requiring airlines to report on-time rates. If the requirement was imposed recently, then the brief reporting period may be insufficient to show that the airlines' relative on-time performance will continue in the future. Moreover, the article fails to provide evidence that all airlines, regardless of on-time record, actually reported, or that the reports are accurate.
In conclusion, the article's claim that Speedee is the best choice for the business traveler is unsubstantiated and may be too hastyTo better evaluate the article's claim, we need more information about Speedee's other features that contribute to its over all appeal, about its on-time record for commuter flights specifically, and about the integrity and length of the reporting upon which the ranking was based.