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TOEFL Essay Topic 165 - You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
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In Japan, where I live, many people think that technology has provided children with more
opportunities to be creative. For the following reasons, however, I firmly believe that due to
advances in technology, children have become less creative nowadays compared to the
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