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My town

TOEFL Essay Topic 24 - A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

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My town

People may say that there is nothing good about the town where I am living. Other people might state that everything is wonderful regarding with the my town. In my opinion, there are both good and bad aspects in this town. The points which I should mention about in connect with my hometown is as follows.

First of all, the air is so clear in the town. The town is surrounded by forest, and so, we can enjoy the fresh air in this town. Before I moved to the town, I was languishing by the illness of my lung. So, I decided to move to the town without any air pollution 5 years ago. Then, through the life of my town, my ailment went better. And now, I am very healthy, and rarely feel sick about the lung. This example clearly illustrates the advantage of life in this town.

Second, the town is very convenient. This town is small, but there are any facilities needed in our lives, such as supermarket, hospital, school, sports center and so on. Yesterday, I was preparing for the dinner. But in cooking, I found that I had forgotten to buy black pepper. But, a convenience store lies two minutes from my home, and I could go to buy the ingredient rightly. My experience strongly demonstrates the nice point of the city.

But, the town is far from the big city, and we need to take a half day to go to and come back from the nearest big city, Tokyo. This is a not good point. I have to wake up at 3 a.m. and get off my home very early to go to my university in Tokyo. I am every time tired with the long way to the university.

In conclusion, there are both good thing and bad thing about this town.


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