TOEFL Essay Topic 166 - People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Author: tomoka | Date: May 28, 2016 | Score:3 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=
Experiences to change a person an adult
When I heard the word of adult, I think about my sister.She is 25 years.But I don’t know when she changes from a child to an adult cleary.But I think she became an adult through working for company.
I think working for company is one way to become an adult because I think members in the company have many responsibility for their acts and works.
Working for company is the experience many people go through. Members of the company have to have a responsibility for working because their miss may be very big losses of their company.
For example, in the company which makes cars,their miss may not only make bad effects for their company but also hurt drivers who buy the product.So, they have to pay attention anytime in order not to make mistakes.
Children sometimes also have the responsibility for what they do.But their mistakes don’t effect so much people than adults’s mistakes.Moreover, because their parents usually take upon themselves a their children’s crime,children don’t pay attention for many things.In conclusion,I think people became an adult through working for company and having responsibility.