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Parents today are more involved in their children’s education

TOEFL Essay Topic 1075 - In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.

Author: JIAQI WANG | Date: December 3, 2017 | Score:5

It is universally acknowledged that parenting plays an important role in children's education. Meanwhile, some people think parents nowadays involve in their kids' education much more than before, while others think that's not true. Therefore, question concerning whether this kind of involvement ...

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People are living longer now Score: 4.5 November 8th, 2017 by s

Generally, humans' average longevity is longer than before. I think there are 2 reasons for that.

One is that people have better foods than before. In dacades of years ago, what people eat depended on the weather and other uncontrollable factors. However, now that we have fully advanced technologies to maintain sufficient amount of crops and stable logistics, we can access our foods whenever we want to eat. All we have to do is just to go to market. For instance, when I was 7 or 8 years old, my country, Japan had seriously cold summer and the rice crop decreased drastically. However, we successfully imported enough rice from foreign countries, such as Thailand and South Korea, and we lived the year without any problem. That was thanks to the worldwide logistic system, which we never had a hundred years ago.

The other is that people live safer lives. We do not have worldwide wars anymore because of modern politics system. We have less and less crime in the world. Moreover, We have less critical accidents since we developed our technology. For example, When I drove a car last month, I had an accident. A taxi crashed against my car, but I did not have any injury because I wore the seat belt at that time. The taxi driver had some injury but recovered soon because I could have appropriate medical cure. Without seatbelts, I would have got injured, and without the modern emergency medical service might have gone into serious condition.

In conclusion, the life expectancy seems getting longer. I believe that is because people can have good foods and people live safe lives.

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