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Decision

TOEFL Essay Topic 55 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Author: taka | Date: April 4, 2018 | Score:5

​Some people prefer to make all of their critical decisions without first consulting with others. I, on the other hand, feel that we should never make important decisions on our own. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.​First of all, while we might think...

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