TOEFL Essay Topic 703 - Do you agree with the following statement? Good teachers are more important to a child's development than good parents. Use specific details to support your argument.
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Good teachers are important to a child’s development but I do not agree with this statement that teachers are more importaht than parents for a child. I am going to argue regrading this with some of my opinion.
First, a child always lives with his parents. Parents know their child more than anyone. Children can learn faster by seeing things and they see every little things in their home with parents. Teachers are only for school and they teach what they are told or suppose to teach in every step but they can’t teach every little thing. children do need good teacher for their good development because when a child comes from school he wants to do what his teacher told him to do but he doesn’t want to do what his parents tell him to do. I have a son and when he comes from school he likes to do what his teacher told him. He doesn’t want to listen to me and somethe he brings some gamr from school and wants to play with me when I tell him about the rules he doesn’t admit that rules and tells me to play how he plays in school even if it is wrong. I am saying that good teachers make differentences in every child’s life.
Second, good parents means a lot to children because if a child has good parents he can always do better in his life. He can learn good manner, good beheaviour. If a child have good teacher than parents I think he can not do good in his life. Here I want to give an example – In my country I had a friend who has a brother her parents didn’t care about their children her dad always drink and used to beat her mother and yell at them. They had some good teacher in school but at home they always in tension; they could not concentrate on their study and at last her brother drop out from highschool and she also could not do further study after high-school.
At last, in my own word I want to go with good parents are more important than good teacher. I would like to add my case that my son has both for good.
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