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Buy for yourself

TOEFL Essay Topic 33 - You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Buy for yourself

The topic of people”s views on how would you spend a gift of money. Some people tend to think that people should buy something that they really want, while others think people should use this money for charity. However, I think Both suggestions above can be considered. Furthermore , I would like spend this gift of money with my family or close friends.

If I received a gift of money, the first thing I want to do is donate a portion of this money to charity organization. Because I believe there are some people who need the money much more than I need, they may use this money to cover their basic need of live for a month or a week. It is good to give some help other people as they need. Second, I would use this money to buy my family and close friend a dinner. One of the most enjoyable moment for people is can be together with your family and friends. People working over 10 or 12 hours a day is very common in nowadays, therefore, we need time to get eating and relax together. The third, I want use the gift of money to buy another gift for myself, that is the a luxury lens for my camera. I really like the photograph, however, those facilities for DSLR are really expensive which I cannot afford it. I have to save my money for entire year to buy a new lens. Therefore, Buying the lens for camera is my priority to purchase.

Of course, there may some people don’t agree with my opinions on this matters. They probably tend to think that people should not receive the money as a gift. However, I believe that accept the gift that people want to give you is a respect, and use this gift in a appropriate way is important as well.




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