Believe goal and self potential

TOEFL Essay Topic 40 - The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Author: naokis | Date: April 17, 2016 | Score:3.5 | => 5 or 6 Essays, Click Here <=

Believe goal and self potential

I agree with the statement. To achieve one’s goal, at least it must be required to keep the continuous hard work. There are two important points to keep doing that.
One is to believe the goal. Someone have to believe that the world must be changed after his goal is realized. Another is to believe the potential of oneself. Someone have to think he can get rid of the hard work.
However, it is very difficult to maintain these points under the hard working. Someone will give up that situation and lost his goal. Therefore, the words “never give up” indicates to keep on pushing oneself to achieve one’s goals.

When I was a student of Ph.D candidate, I usually suspected whether my goal was true or not. At that time, I had to publish many research papers and it was required to get many experimental results. I could not believe I would achieve such a many experiments. When such thinking was in my mind, I could not believe I would get Ph.D degree. And then, I suspected whether the Ph.D degree was actually required for my job career or not.

This consideration would be pointless. Because Ph.D degree would be plus to my career, I have decided to get it. It indicates that the hard work will sometimes lead to lost one’s belief. Moreover, I would be almost gave up the experiments because there were many tasks even though the it was not still finished.

In such a situation, the message from the family, friend and colleague cheered me up and I could keep believing my goal and potential. The main concern of those comments was very simple, “Never, never give up. You can do it!”.

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