TOEFL Essay Topic 23 - In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
Basic to any understanding of the development of the current education is not only the study marks the students make
Basic to any understanding of the development of the current education is not only the study marks the students make but also the practical ability they have in the ever-changing society. In my point of view, it is good for teenagers have jobs while they are still students.
The most significant reason to support my opinion is the students can put what they have learned into the usual life so that they can apply it flexibly and freely. For example, a student is working at the counter of a supermarket. Everyday, he counts the money, calculates the bills and gives the changes to the customers. In this case, this student will use the most convenient and considered math method to solve the problem while working. The way he using makes him have a deeper expression, a more skillful apply and raise his speed of calculating.
On the other hand, teenagers having jobs while they are still students can widen their horizons and improve their ability to communicate. If a student has a job, he will communicate with all kinds of people he meets while working and have the chance to know some parts of the society that differ from his similar campus. During the working time, this student will communicate with not only teachers, schoolmates but also workers, drivers, managers and the like, whom he probably can not see in the campus. And then, he learns different ways to communicate with different people and can get along well with the all kinds of people. His ability to communicate will improve effectively and efficiently. Even more, he will learn something new for him by knowing the work style, job background and so on of the people so that he knows more than the one has no jobs.
In a conclusion, I truly believe that it is dramatically good for teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Because it is natural, logic and make the students have a more meaningful and colorful life by touching the current society.
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